Thursday, October 31, 2013

House on Mango Street--cont.

In your reading groups, read aloud pg. 49-61 (4 stories) in House on Mango Street.

Discuss these questions after you read each story and post a comment for your reading group.

"Hips"



1. What are the girls doing as they talk about hips? What are hips good for? What does their conversation tell you about their ages?

"The First Job"

Why does this story have a misleading title? What happens to Esperanza on her first day at work? What does this episode tell you about her family and their expectations?

"Papa Who Wakes Up Tired in the Dark"
Why does Esperanza's father cry? How does his crying make her feel?

"Born Bad"
What happens to Aunt Lupe? Why does Esperanza believe she deserves to go to hell? What special relationship did Esperanza have with her aunt?

Focus on Themes, Mood, Setting, and Conflict.  How will your stories connect and convey theme, mood, setting and conflict?

Major Themes
Maturity
 

The main theme of the book is Esperanza’s increasing maturity. It is in evidence throughout the book, as Esperanza talks to older female characters, trying to determine who her role models will be, or as she overcomes her insecurities and learns about her own strengths and weaknesses.



Home and Identity

Throughout the book, Esperanza attaches meaning to where she lives: she takes it personally as an extension of herself. Thus, the fact that she is unhappy and ashamed at her Mango Street house is a major point of contention in the book, and her dreams of another home parallel her dreams of becoming who she wants to be.


Minor Theme Love

Though it is not discussed directly in the book, love of different kinds, between different characters, holds many relationships together. Family love is contrasted with romantic love, and mistaken ideas about what love is (particularly as concern Marin and Sally) are prominent in the book.




MOOD

The mood of the story is highly influenced by Esperanza’s own mood, and the mood of the story is uneven to reflect Esperanza’s uneven moods. When she is happy, as in "Our Good Day," the mood is joyous, relaxed, and untroubled. When she is frightened or hurt, as in "Red Clowns," the mood reflects that. Esperanza has a complex personality, so the mood ranges from childish temper tantrums to solemn thoughtfulness. In general, this indicates Esperanza’s place in the world: intelligent, but not yet fully grown up. The mood is childish and adult by turns.

SETTING

The setting of the story is a poor Hispanic neighborhood in Chicago. Judging from the cars people drive, it is probably the 1960’s. The neighborhood is very close-knit, full of immigrants who do not speak English well and rarely leave the neighborhood.

Conflict

Protagonist / Antagonist

Esperanza, the protagonist, has no real antagonist except, perhaps, herself. The story concerns her journey to maturity. Conflicts in the story often arise because of Esperanza’s misunderstanding of herself. For example, she makes fun of her sick aunt, then realizes how much she values her aunt’s friendship, and feels terrible about what she has done. Her shyness is another aspect of her immaturity that forces conflict upon her: she wants to be like bolder girls she knows, who have secret meetings with boys, but does not have the courage. Additionally, Esperanza must mature enough to discover her own identity, and understand how the Mango Street she hates so much fits into her life.


Period 4
Continue working on your own stories.

Tuesday, October 29, 2013

House on Mango Street

Reading Schedule

1. In the vignette “The House on Mango Street,” Esperanza mentions that her family moved several times before they arrived on Mango Street. How do you think moving to several places affected Esperanza and her family? How would you feel if you had to keep moving from place and place?

2. Esperanza states that the “house on Mango Street is ours” (3). She then compares living with a landlord to home ownership. Are there any benefits to having a landlord? Being a homeowner? How do the responsibilities of being a landlord differ from the responsibilities of being a homeowner?

3. Elements of Esperanza’s life mirror those of the book’s author, Sandra Cisneros. Read a biography of Sandra Cisneros. Watch Sandra Cisneros’s Interview. In what ways are the lives of Esperanza and Cisneros similar? How do they differ? What elements of Cisneros’s life are evident in “The House on Mango Street?”
http://www.gradesaver.com/author/sandra-cisneros
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Pyf89VsNmg 

4. Some of the vignettes in “The House on Mango Street” deal with immigrating to the United States from other countries. Can you find evidence in the book about the factors that were instrumental in causing people to immigrant to the United States? If not, why do think they immigrated to the United States.

5. Esperanza’s description of the neighborhoods she has lived in is “poverty-stricken.” Many of the neighborhood’s residents are immigrants. Given that many people immigrate to the United States to find a better life, how might their lives have been in their home countries? Is there evidence in the story to show their lives have improved?

6. Does the fact that Cisneros and her protagonist, Esperanza, share similar backgrounds make “The House on Mango Street” more real or relatable? If not, how could Cisneros make the story more relatable? Use examples from the text to support your points.

7. In The House on Mango Street, Cisneros uses stereotypes to describe some of the characters. In your journal, write short responses on the following topics: (1) Are stereotypes bad or good? Include three reasons to support your answer. (2) Why do people use stereotypes to describe groups of people? (3) Have you ever categorized someone based on a stereotype?

8. In an interview, Cisneros stated that The House on Mango Street was inspired by a house on “Campbell Street” but she didn’t want to use the name because it sounds like the soup company. How does changing the name to “Mango” Street impact the story? If the title were The House on Campbell Street, would you expect its contents to differ?

9. Authors can use literature as a response to issues affecting society. How does Sandra Cisneros use The House on Mango Street as a response to the roles of women in society? Explain two ways the novel could differ if it were written in the present day.

10. The House on Mango Street differs from other forms of literature because it is written in vignettes. Why did Cisneros choose this form? How would the form differ if she wrote the story in the 1960s? 2000s?


Continue to work on writing your own "House on Mango Street
8-10 Vignettes modeled on the book but based on your own life, family, friends, neighborhood
Title your vignettes



Friday, October 25, 2013

Eleven by Sandra Cisneros/Barbie-Q

AGENDA

1, For classwork credit:
Read the following two stories by Sandra Cisneros.
Then discuss the questions for Barbie-Q with a partner and post a comment on the blog answering the questions (you can cut and paste them).

2. Think about the "chapters of your life" by filling out high and low points, dreams, and things you do daily on the handout.
What people have been significant in your life?  Can you write vignettes about them?

3. Continue to work on your vignette.

4. HMWK: For Tuesday, read to page 48 in House



Eleven
By Sandra Cisneros


What they don’t understand about birthdays and what they never tell you is that when you’re eleven, you’re also ten, and nine, and eight, and seven, and six, and five, and four, and three, and two, and one. And when you wake up on your eleventh birthday you expect to feel eleven, but you don’t. You open your eyes and everything’s just like yesterday, only it’s today. And you don’t feel eleven at all. You feel like you’re still ten. And you are—underneath the year that makes you eleven.
Like some days you might say something stupid, and that’s the part of you that’s still ten. Or maybe some days you might need to sit on your mama’s lap because you’re scared, and that’s the part of you that’s five. And maybe one day when you’re all grown up maybe you will need to cry like if you’re three, and that’s okay. That’s what I tell Mama when she’s sad and needs to cry. Maybe she’s feeling three.
Because the way you grow old is kind of like an onion or like the rings inside a tree trunk or like my little wooden dolls that fit one inside the other, each year inside the next one. That’s how being eleven years old is.
You don’t feel eleven. Not right away. It takes a few days, weeks even, sometimes even months before you say Eleven when they ask you. And you don’t feel smart eleven, not until you’re almost twelve. That’s the way it is.
Only today I wish I didn’t have only eleven years rattling inside me like pennies in a tin Band-Aid box. Today I wish I was one hundred and two instead of eleven because if I was one hundred and two I’d have known what to say when Mrs. Price put the red sweater on my desk. I would’ve known how to tell her it wasn’t mine instead of just sitting there with that look on my face and nothing coming out of my mouth.
“Whose is this?” Mrs. Price says, and she holds the red sweater up in the air for all the class to see. “Whose? It’s been sitting in the coatroom for a month.”
“Not mine,” says everybody. “Not me.”
“It has to belong to somebody,” Mrs. Price keeps saying, but nobody can remember. It’s an ugly sweater with red plastic buttons and a collar and sleeves all stretched out like you could use it for a jump rope. It’s maybe a thousand years old and even if it belonged to me I wouldn’t say so.
Maybe because I’m skinny, maybe because she doesn’t like me, that stupid Sylvia Saldivar says, “I think it belongs to Rachel.” An ugly sweater like that, all raggedy and old, but Mrs. Price believes her. Mrs. Price takes the sweater and puts it right on my desk, but when I open my mouth nothing comes out.
“That’s not, I don’t, you’re not . . . Not mine,” I finally say in a little voice that was maybe me when I was four.
“Of course it’s yours,” Mrs. Price says, “I remember you wearing it once.” Because she’s older and the teacher, she’s right and I’m not.
Not mine, not mine, not mine, but Mrs. Price is already turning to page thirty-two, and math problem number four. I don’t know why but all of a sudden I’m feeling sick inside, like the part of me that’s three wants to come out of my eyes, only I squeeze them shut tight and bite down on my teeth real hard and try to remember today I am eleven, eleven. Mama is making a cake for me for tonight, and when Papa comes home everybody will sing Happy birthday, happy birthday to you.
But when the sick feeling goes away and I open my eyes, the red sweater’s still sitting there like a big red mountain. I move the red sweater to the corner of my desk with my ruler. I move my pencil and books and eraser as far from it as possible. I even move my chair a little to the right. Not mine, not mine, not mine.
In my head I’m thinking how long till lunchtime, how long till I can take the red sweater and throw it over the schoolyard fence, or leave it hanging on a parking meter, or bunch it up into a little ball and toss it in the alley. Except when math period ends Mrs. Price says loud and in front of everybody, “Now, Rachel, that’s enough,” because she sees I’ve shoved the red sweater to the tippy-tip corner of my desk and it’s hanging all over the edge like a waterfall, but I don’t care.
“Rachel,” Mrs. Price says. She says it like she’s getting mad. “You put that sweater on right now and no more nonsense.”
“But it’s not—“
“Now!” Mrs. Price says.
This is when I wish I wasn’t eleven, because all the years inside of me—ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one—are pushing at the back of my eyes when I put one arm through one sleeve of the sweater that smells like cottage cheese, and then the other arm through the other and stand there with my arms apart like if the sweater hurts me and it does, all itchy and full of germs that aren’t mine.
That’s when everything I’ve been holding in since this morning, since when Mrs. Price put the sweater on my desk, finally lets go, and all of a sudden I’m crying in front of everybody. I wish I was invisible but I’m not. I’m eleven and it’s my birthday today and I’m crying like I’m three in front of everybody. I put my head down on the desk and bury my face in my stupid clown-sweater arms. My face all hot and spit coming out of my mouth because I can’t stop the little animal noises from coming out of me, until there aren’t any more tears left in my eyes, and it’s just my body shaking like when you have the hiccups, and my whole head hurts like when you drink milk too fast.
But the worst part is right before the bell rings for lunch. That stupid Phyllis Lopez, who is even dumber than Sylvia Saldivar, says she remembers the red sweater is hers! I take it off right away and give it to her, only Mrs. Price pretends like everything’s okay.
Today I’m eleven. There’s a cake Mama’s making for tonight, and when Papa comes home from work we’ll eat it. There’ll be candles and presents and everybody will sing Happy birthday, happy birthday to you, Rachel, only it’s too late.
I’m eleven today. I’m eleven, ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one, but I wish I was one hundred and two. I wish I was anything but eleven, because I want today to be far away already, far away like a runaway balloon, like a tiny o in the sky, so tiny-tiny you have to close your eyes to see it.

From Woman Hollering Creek Copyright © 1991 by Sandra Cisneros. Reprinted by permission of Susan Bergholtz Literary Services, New York. All rights reserved.



Barbie-Q
By Sandra Cisneros

Yours is the one with mean eyes and a ponytail.  Striped swimsuit, stilettos, sunglasses, and gold hoop earrings.  Mine is the one with bubble hair.  Red swimsuit, stilettos, pearl earrings, and a wire stand.  But that’s all we can afford, besides one extra outfit apiece.  Yours, “Red Flair,” sophisticated A-line coatdress with a Jackie Kennedy pillbox hat, white gloves, handbag, and heels included.  Mine, “solo in the Spotlight,” evening elegance in black glitter strapless gown with a puffy skirt at the bottom like a mermaid tail, formal-length gloves, pink chiffon scarf, and mike included.  From so much dressing and undressing, the black glitter wears off where her titties stick out.  This and a dress invented from an old sock when we cut holes here and here and here, the cuff rolled over for the glamorous, fancy-free, off-the-shoulder look.

Every time the same story.  Your Barbie is roommates with my Barbie, and my Barbie’s boyfriend comes over and your Barbie steals him, okay?  Kiss kiss kiss.  Then the two Barbies fight. You dumbbell!  He’s mine.  Oh no he’s not, you stinky!  Only Ken’s invisible, right?  Because we don’t have money for a stupid-looking boy doll when we’d both rather ask for a new Barbie outfit next Christmas.  We have to make do with your mean-eyed Barbie and my bubblehead Barbie and our one outfit apiece not including the sock dress.

Until next Sunday when we are walking through the flea market on Maxwell Street and there!  Lying on the street next to some tool bits, and platform shoes with the heels all squashed, and a fluorescent green wicker wastebasket, and aluminum foil, and hubcaps, and a pink shag rug, and windshield wiper blades, and dusty mason jars, and a coffee can full of rusty nails.  There!  Where?  Two Mattel boxes.  One with the “Career Gal” ensemble, snappy black-and-white business suit, three-quarter-length sleeve jacket with kick-pleated skirt, red sleeveless shell, gloves, pumps, and matching hat included.  The other, “Sweet Dreams,” dreamy pink-and-white plaid nightgown and matching robe, lace-trimmed slippers, hair-brush and hand mirror included.  How much?  Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, until they say okay.

On the outside you and me skipping and humming but inside we are doing loopity-loops and pirouetting.  Until at the next vendor’s stand, next to boxed pies, and bright orange toilet brushes, and rubber gloves, and wrench sets, and bouquests of feather flowers, and glass towel racks, and steel wool, and Alvin and the Chipmunks records, there!  And there!  And there!  And there!  and there!  and there!  and there!  Bendable Legs Barbie with her new page-boy hairdo, Midge, Barbie’s best friend.  Ken, Barbie’s boyfriend.  Skipper, Barbie’s little sister.  Tutti and Todd, Barbie and Skipper’s tiny twin sister and brother.  Skipper’s friends, Scooter and Ricky.  Alan, Ken’s buddy.  And Francie, Barbie’ MOD’ern cousin.

Everybody today selling toys, all of them damaged with water and smelling of smoke.  Because a big toy warehouse on Halsted Street burned down yesterday—see there?—the smoke still rising and drifting across the Dan Ryan expressway.  And now there is a big fire sale at Maxwell Street, today only.

So what if we didn’t get our new Bendable Legs Barbie and Midge and Ken and Skipper and Tutti and Todd and Scooter and Ricky and Alan and Francie in nice clean boxes and had to buy them on Maxwell Street, all water-soaked and sooty.  So what if our Barbies smell like smoke when you hold them up to your nose even after you wash and wash and wash them.  And if the prettiest doll, Barbie’s MOD’ern cousin Francie with real eyelashes, eyelash brush included, has a left foot that’s melted a little—so?  If you dress her in her new “Prom Pinks” outfit, satin splendor with matching coat, gold belt, clutch, and hair bow included, so long as you don’t lift her dress, right?—who’s to know.


Discussion questions for Sandra Cisneros‘s “Barbie-Q”sc.jpg
  1. What could Barbie’s wardrobe, e.g. Red Flair, Career Gal, Jackie Kennedy pillbox hat, Prom Pinks, suggest about a woman’s status in society?
  2. What values and ideals does Barbie represent/symbolize in the story? What does she offer the two girls in the story?
  3. Do you believe that Cisneros has some feminist concerns in Barbie-Q? If yes, explain what these concerns could be.
  4. What could the image of flawed/damaged dolls signify?
  5. Do you believe that Cisneros voices some racial concerns in Barbie-Q? If yes, explain what these concerns could be. Comment on the origin of the protagonists.
  6. What could the story tell us about the influence of hegemonic culture over the dominated?
  7. Discuss whether Barbie is the embodiment of women’s oppression or liberation.
  8. Why does Cisneros associate the title of the story with a cooking technique?


 

Wednesday, October 23, 2013

House on Mango Street--Vignettes

AGENDA:

1.  Grammar Warm-up

Grammar Exercise: Correct the following sentences
The students found it very hard to believe Mrs Snodwhumple had ever been a teenager herself, in fact they found it hard to believe that she was human at all.

The envelope enveloping the leter (complete the fragment)

The nieghbors supposebly had a pet dodo bird that excaped but I no that dodo birds are extinct.

The star athlete turned out to be a alien. From the newly discovered planet gezbarkawda.

My brother, Sundar, he puts catsup and maple syrup on everything.

It is supposebly difficult to pat your head rub your stomach and chew gum at the same time.

Who's idea was it to allow students to ride skateboards in the hall.

A even-toed ungulate which is better known as a camel keeps the sand out of it's eyes with 3 eyelids.

After Lee took a break to walk his Iguana and pet his Python he went back to work on his marshmellow sculpture.

The mall closed it's doors lifted into the air and flew off into space with a large and handsome truck stop.

2. The House on Mango Street


vi·gnette
vinˈyet/
noun
noun: vignette; plural noun: vignettes
  1. 1.
    a brief evocative description, account, or episode.
  2. 2.
    a small illustration or portrait photograph that fades into its background without a definite border.
    • a small ornamental design filling a space in a book or carving, typically based on foliage.
verb
verb: vignette; 3rd person present: vignettes; past tense: vignetted; past participle: vignetted; gerund or present participle: vignetting
1.
portray (someone) in the style of a vignette.

Four Skinny Trees

"Four Skinny Trees" is an excerpt from the book by Sandra Cisneros entitled The House on Mango Street. "Four Skinny Trees" is found on pages 74 and 75. Copyright Sandra Cisneros, 1984 and published by Vintage Contemporaries, 1991.

"They are the only ones who understand me. I am the only one who understands them. Four skinny trees with skinny necks and pointy elbows like mine. Four who do not belong here but are here. Four raggedy excuses planted by the city. From our room we can hear them, but Nenny just sleeps and doesn't appreciate these things.
"Their strength is secret. They send ferocious roots beneath the ground. They grow up and they grow down and grab the earth between their hairy toes and bite the sky with violent teeth and never quit their anger. This is how they keep.
"Let one forget his reason for being, they'd all droop like tulips in a glass, each with their arms around the other. Keep, keep, keep, trees say when I sleep. They teach.
"When I am too sad and too skinny to keep keeping, when I am a tiny thing against so many bricks, then it is I look at trees. When there is nothing left to look at on this street. Four who grew despite concrete. Four who reach and do not forget to reach. Four whose only reason is to be and be."

http://writingfix.com/Chapter_Book_Prompts/HouseonMangoStreet2.htm

http://writingfix.com/Chapter_Book_Prompts/HouseonMangoStreet4.htm

Monday, October 21, 2013

Presentation of movie trailers for The First Part Last

AGENDA:

1. Present iMovie trailers of First Part Last and discuss

2. Writing prompt--Natalie Goldberg's  "Test 1"--Using Sensory Details

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Finish and Present iMovie trailers of First Part Last

AGENDA:

Period 3:
Finish your iMovie project today. If you have finished, go over the following discussion questions with your partner. Does your iMovie address the plot, character, and structure of the book?  Does it make a reader want to read the book?  What information do you need to provide to interest a potential reader?
Proofread your text for spelling and grammar errors!
  1. Plot in The First Part Last: What is the central conflict in the novel?  Explain.
  2. Story structure in The First Part Last: How does the author structure the novel?  What is the effect of this structure?  Explain.
  3. Character in The First Part Last: What internal conflicts does Bobby face in the novel?  What external conflicts does he face?  Explain the source of each.
  4. Plot in The First Part Last: What happened to Nia during the delivery of Feather?  How is this foreshadowed throughout the chapters in the book?  Explain.
  5. Plot in The First Part Last: What important decision does Bobby make at the end of the book?  Why?  Do you think this was the best decision?  Explain.

Period 4:
iMovie presentations

Tuesday, October 15, 2013

First Part Last

AGENDA:

Warmup: Accept/Except  quiz
http://homepage.smc.edu/quizzes/cheney_joyce/AcceptExcept.html

Linking verbs:
http://www.softschools.com/quizzes/grammar/linking_verbs/quiz522.html


1. Work on the questions from the last class and post your answers on this blog post for credit

2. Continue to work on your iMovie trailer for First Part Last with your partner

Thursday, October 10, 2013

First Part Last trailer/Discussion Questions/Character Conflict sheets

Agenda:

1. THINK, PAIR, SHARE:
Please discuss with a partner and answer the following questions in a blog post.
    Parts III & IV
  1. Read pages 58 - 61 and pages 70 - 75 together.
  2. What happened?
    Why did Bobby get arrested?
  3. What was the consequence of Bobby taking the day off? (page 95)
  4. What decision had Bobby & Nia mad about the baby? (page 106) Why?
  5. What happens for the first time on page 115?
  6. Where is Nia?
  7. What happened to her?
  8. What did Bobby decide to do? (page 118) Why? (page 125)
  9. Why is the baby's name Feather? (page 124)
  10. Where do Bobby and Feather end up?
  11. What do you think will happen? Happily ever after?
  12. What did you think about this book?
2. Begin working on your iMovie trailer for the book.  Use the tutorial to help you get started if you are unfamilar with iMovie.

3. From the last class: Turn in your Character Conflict sheets


Tuesday, October 8, 2013

First Part Last/Linking Verbs

AGENDA:  Keep the blog open but minimized and follow the activities for the day.

1. Word Choice List #2


accept: to receive. Gail Devers accepted the gold medal.
except: to exclude. Every swimmer received an Olympic medal except for Janet Evans.
aid: assistance. Students often ask their parents for aid.
aide: an assistant. A congressional aide said the senator was unavailable for comment.
because of: shows cause and effect. Because of a tuition increase, students were angry.
due to: use only with a linking verb. The riot at Johnson Hall was due to a tuition increase.
because: gives reason or cause for something. The bridge was closed because the river flooded.
since: denotes a period of time. The bridge has been closed since the river flooded.
compose: made up of other things, to create or put together (e.g., parts, ingredients). The car is composed of many mechanical and electrical systems.
comprise: takes in, includes or embraces other things, contains. The United States comprises 50 states.
Note: The whole comprises the parts -- the whole is never comprised of the parts.

2. The Linking Verb

Recognize a linking verb when you see one.

Linking verbs do not express action. Instead, they connect the subject of the verb to additional information about the subject. Look at the examples below:
Keila is a shopaholic.
Ising isn't something that Keila can do. Is connects the subject, Keila, to additional information about her, that she will soon have a huge credit card bill to pay.

During the afternoon, my cats are content to nap on the couch.
Areing isn't something that cats can do. Are is connecting the subject, cats, to something said about them, that they enjoy sleeping on the furniture.

After drinking the old milk, Vladimir turned green.
Turned connects the subject, Vladimir, to something said about him, that he needed an antacid.

A ten-item quiz seems impossibly long after a night of no studying.
Seems connects the subject, a ten-item quiz, with something said about it, that its difficulty depends on preparation, not length.

Irene always feels sleepy after pigging out on pizza from Antonio's.
Feels connects the subject, Irene, to her state of being, sleepiness.
The following verbs are true linking verbs: any form of the verb be [am, is, are, was, were, has been, are being, might have been, etc.], become, and seem. These true linking verbs are always linking verbs.
Then you have a list of verbs with multiple personalities: appear, feel, grow, look, prove, remain, smell, sound, taste, and turn. Sometimes these verbs are linking verbs; sometimes they are action verbs.
How do you tell when they are action verbs and when they are linking verbs?
If you can substitute am, is, or are and the sentence still sounds logical, you have a linking verb on your hands.
If, after the substitution, the sentence makes no sense, you are dealing with an action verb instead. Here are some examples:
Sylvia tasted the spicy squid eyeball stew.
Sylvia is the stew? I don't think so! Tasted, therefore, is an action verb in this sentence, something Sylvia is doing.
The squid eyeball stew tasted good. The stew is good? You bet. Make your own!
I smell the delicious aroma of a mushroom and papaya pizza baking in the oven.
I am the aroma? No way! Smell, in this sentence, is an action verb, something I am doing.
The mushroom and papaya pizza smells heavenly.
The pizza is heavenly? Definitely! Try a slice!

When my dog Oreo felt the wet grass beneath her paws, she bolted up the stairs and curled up on the couch.
Oreo is the wet grass? Of course not! Here, then, felt is an action verb, something Oreo is doing.
My dog Oreo feels depressed after seven straight days of rain.
Oreo is depressed? Without a doubt! Oreo hates the wet.
This substitution will not work for appear. With appear, you have to analyze the function of the verb.
Swooping out of the clear blue sky, the blue jay appeared on the branch.
Appear is something a blue jay can do—especially when food is near.
The blue jay appeared happy to see the bird feeder.
Here, appeared is connecting the subject, the blue jay, to its state of mind, happiness.
 3. Questions from First Part Last (Discuss and work with handout to record your responses)
 CLOSE READING:
 How does Bobby feel about Feather? Would this be different if Nia were awake? (pg 81)
Examine the text for examples of  INTERNAL CONFLICT.  Are there EXTERNAL CONFLICTS Bobby faces? Use the handout to record TEXT EVIDENCE and page numbers of places where Bobby expresses his conflicts.

You may need these sections to design your iMovie trailer for the book. You can work with a partner on this project!  Be sure you begin to note key sections of the book.  Start thinking about images and music you will want to use.  NEXT CLASS we will go over how to make a movie trailer and story boarding!  In the meantime, watch these videos.

Here are examples of trailers other students have posted on youtube: 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GSdVSz0jMaE&feature=player_embedded 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=blKHHy8Bbng

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zPDwpV6VMNc  

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=btYhBAo8Zzg 

4. Book of Lists--Start this in your journal

And if you have time, make a list of 100 (this can be a whole class book project for us down the line).

For example, start a list of things to write a list about or things you love. 

Visit Keri Smith's website!  Se her list 0f 100 ideas

http://www.kerismith.com/popular-posts/100-ideas/





Friday, October 4, 2013

Friday Agenda 10/4

 AGENDA:

HMWK for Tuesday   Read to Part IV in First Part Last
1. Today begin to practice keeping the blog always open but minimized on your desktop so that you can check your progress throughout the lesson.   We will begin by practicing affect/effect by taking the practice quizzes in an earlier post.
Go to these web sites and spend 5-10 minutes trying to get a perfect score:
Quick quizzes:

http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar_quiz/effect_vs_affect_1.asp

http://www.softschools.com/quizzes/grammar/among_between/quiz3174.html 

2. Whole class reading: Read the interview with Angela Johnson. As we read aloud,  highlight or mark any sections that you find interesting or important.  Knowing why an author writes and why they believe writing is important gives you an insight into the writing process--and how to develop your own voice.  This handout with your notes will be useful for the final book test.

3. THINK, PAIR, SHARE:
When you have completed 1 and 2, discuss with a partner the following questions and post a comment to Questions 1-4 as indicated.

THE FIRST PART LAST
by Angela Johnson
  Discussion Questions
    Parts I & II
  1. Who are the main characters?
  2. Who is the Narrator?
  3. What is this book about?
  4. When and Where does this story take place?
  5. What do you think about the author's use of language?
    Is the language realistic for Bobby?
  6. Discuss the writing style of this book (non-linear): Now/Then.
    Do you like it?
    Does it make it harder to read?
    Why do you think the author decided to write it this way?
  7. How does Bobby feel about his baby?
  8. How does Bobby feel about Nia?
  9. Where do you think Nia is? Why isn't she taking care of her baby?
  10. Talk about parents' and friends' reactions to news of the pregnancy?
  11. Do you think Bobby is a good kid?
  12. What do you think about this book so far?

POST A COMMENT TO THE FOLLOWING QUESTIONS:
1. How did Bobby’s parents respond to the news of Nia’s pregnancy (pg. 12)? How did Nia’s parents respond to this (pg. 20)? How would your parents respond to this same announcement?
2. Look at how Bobby’s friends react (pg. 37-40). How would your friends react?
3. What does Bobby mean by saying, “I walk to my room…look around my room and miss me” (pg. 35)?


4. If you have not completed your story, work on your story for the remainder of the period.  Try to finish it.  ON TUESDAY, we will be doing a WRITER'S WORKSHOP in small groups.

5. FOR EXTRA CREDIT:  If you have completed the lesson and your story, try to write a poem based on "I Used to ..."  Go to the website to write one online.  This is like the "now and then"
approach of First Part Last


http://ettcweb.lr.k12.nj.us/forms/iusedto.htm

Write an Instant "I Used To..." Poem

Method:


Line   1 I used to
Line   2 But now I
Line   3 I always
Line   4 But I never
Line   5  I once
Line   6 But now I
Line   7 If I could
Line   8  I would
Line   9  I never
Line 10 But I might
Line 11 I can't
Line 12 But I can
Line 13 I won't
Line 14 But I might
Line 15 I used to
Line 16 But now I

Sample:

I used to think that summers stretched slow and lazy for a year
But now I know better
I always thought "school one year, summer one year"
But I never counted off the days on my fingers
I once felt hours stretch long and easy
But now I hear a panicky tick-tock
If I could step into a time machine
I would go back and reset the clock
I never gave it a thought before
But I might seriously consider it now
I can't turn life into a sci-fi movie
But I can gobble up every day 'til I'm filled up happy
I won't ever be 16 again
But I might be a teenager at heart
I used to think that summers stretched slow and lazy for a year
But now I know better

Interview w/ Angela Johnson

http://www.teachingbooks.net/author_collection.cgi?id=28&a=1

Angela Johnson

In-depth Written Interview

Insights Beyond the Slideshows

Angela Johnson interviewed while in Madison, Wisconsin on October 6, 2005.

TEACHINGBOOKS: You've won the Coretta Scott King Author Award three times — for Toning the Sweep, Heaven and The First Part Last. Your book, Heaven was written before The First Part Last but is a sort of prequel to it. How did you come to write The First Part Last after having already written Heaven?
ANGELA JOHNSON: The wonderful thing about The First Part Last is I didn't want to write the book at all. As far as I'm concerned, I don't do prequels; I don't do sequels.
Then, I went to New York and visited some after-school programs for a week. I was on the subway and there was this beautiful kid. He looked about 15 or 16, and he was with a baby. It was 11:00 in the morning, and I was thinking, "Why is this kid not in school? Is this his daughter; is this his sister? What's the deal?"
The train stopped, and he got ready to get off the train, I actually wanted to follow this kid down the street and question him. Something came over me. I went back to the hotel and wrote three chapters of what became The First Part Last. I felt provoked, and I didn't want it to happen. Sometimes it just comes over you and there is the story or the character. The First Part Last was the easiest book I've ever written. Bobby was just there. Everything was there.
TEACHINGBOOKS: The First Part Last, like many of your books, carries some heavy messages, though your writing never comes off as preachy.
ANGELA JOHNSON: Preaching to teens about teenage pregnancy is like preaching to a lamp. These are human beings, and they do what they want.
The First Part Last is definitely a cautionary tale, but it's not preachy. Bobby loves his baby, but what has he lost? He's lost the love of his life at 16. He's lost many of his freedoms. His friends still love him, but he's lost part of that relationship. He's lost being a child, because he is now the daddy. I always figure, show what's real — you don't have to preach. I love Bobby's responsibility. He has almost a romantic belief that, "I've lost Nia, so I'm going to raise this baby." It's noble. But then reality sets in, and some of it is not pretty.
The majority of parents have said they like The First Part Last. But, I have had parents say, "I'm not letting my kid read this book because it'll give them ideas." I said, "Ideas about going into a coma? Ideas about having this baby who's weighed you down and you've lost your childhood?" I mean, which idea? Obviously these people haven't read the book.
TEACHINGBOOKS: Will you write about any other characters from Heaven?
ANGELA JOHNSON: Yes. One more book — it's called Sweet. It's about Shoogy. Shoogy is still unknowable to me. I'm writing about her, and yet I still don't really know her. She is an enigma.
TEACHINGBOOKS: You also write and have written many picture books. Where did your idea for A Sweet Smell of Roses emerge from?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I based the two little girls in A Sweet Smell of Roses on two real little girls who had marvelous spirit and participated in civil rights marches. In the documentary called Eyes on the Prize, two women were interviewed who were around seven and eight during the civil rights movement. They shared their experiences about how they would go off to marches without their parents. The wonderful thing is, the adults around them took care of them as if they were their own children.
Something really interesting happened in the creation of A Sweet Smell of Roses. In creating picture books, there's usually little or no collaboration between author and artist. The illustrator, Eric Velasquez, was selected by my editor; I never did share anything to him about why I wrote the book. Would you believe, Eric included artwork from the Eyes on the Prizedocumentary, and he wrote a foreword for the book about the documentary's filmmaker. It's just this bizarre kismet.
TEACHINGBOOKS: Several of your books don't have happy endings. How do you respond when people point this out?
ANGELA JOHNSON: At the end of some of my books, everything is not always happiness and light. Life is not always this big, jolly party. It is just life, and it just goes on. But I always like to leave the end as a beginning. It's not necessarily happy, and it's not necessarily sad. It is just life. I'm a happy person, but I'm a realist and I write contemporary realism.
TEACHINGBOOKS: You also like to include humor in your books.
ANGELA JOHNSON: I believe there should be more fun books with African-American children in them. We're inundated with family stories and folk tales and the happy family. I understand that; I write those books, too. But there has to be a place for humor.
I love humor in any way, shape or form. Where Have You Gone, Vivian Dartow is going to be my funny book. Writing this book, I relived high school all over again — I thought I had it down, and in reality, I was just the biggest nerd.
TEACHINGBOOKS: What do you do when you're stuck?
ANGELA JOHNSON: When I have trouble writing, I do everything but write. I like to travel when I'm blocked, and I usually come out of writing blocks after I travel.
As it turns out, my books are usually geographically motivated. I wrote A Cool Moonlightwhen I was in Aruba. I was on a beach with lots of sunlight writing a book about a child who can't go out in the daylight. I had just come back from Cape Cod when I wrote Looking for Red. The First Part Last came from New York, and Toning the Sweep came from when I was in the desert with my brother. Bird is the one book that was written when I was loving being at home.
There's always going to be something in life that will ignite you. I always believe that. It's going to be a newspaper article. It's going to be something you heard at the supermarket. It's going to be something you felt when you were going for a walk.
TEACHINGBOOKS: What other influences make their way into your writing?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I have two nieces and a nephew. When they were much younger, their presence in my life had an interesting effect on my writing. I took care of them a lot, and it gave me a sense of the world of children. It was wonderful. As they get older, I see myself writing books for older children.
It has always been important in my books that the adults can be even a little emotionally neglectful or just living their lives, but in the end there is a safety net with them. In a wonderfully healthy adolescence and teen world, your parents are there — they're supportive, they're loving, they're not too obnoxious — and you go on about your life. When you're home, you're secure and they're there and they leave you alone and then you go out again. I had a huge safety net in my parents as a teenager.
Every book has pieces from my life. For instance, all my nieces and nephews are biracial. I have gay friends who have children. I had a friend whose child ran away. I take looks around me. Another example is that a female friend of mine died, and one of her children kept thinking she saw her, as a ghost out in the garden. There are so many things that I've incorporated in my books. Obviously, these are subjects that I care about and are important.
TEACHINGBOOKS: What do you like to talk with students about?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I always ask if any of them journal. I find journaling is a touchstone. When kids do that, they are secure in their writing. There are kids who, as far as they're concerned, writing stops when they leave the school. But, there are kids who are putting down any feelings they have; they're raging on paper. I say not everyone is going to be a writer, but everyone can write. No one ever has to see what they've written.
I tell them "We're not all going to be published, but your emotions — all of you have such strong emotions! Start journaling and become comfortable with what you feel. Write it down and remember. If nothing else, when you're 40 you can laugh about it like I do when I look back at mine."
TEACHINGBOOKS: What sorts of things happen when young people write-?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I'm amazed by teen poets — the poetry slams are just amazing. I am in love with the idea of teenagers getting up there and just going for it. The kids who are participating in poetry slams are the ones with something deep about them, and in recent years, now have this incredible outlet.
When I was in school, if there were some guys who were poets, I didn't know it. Now you're seeing these young men who are. I love that they're being handed the power to do something positive.
TEACHINGBOOKS: Have you ever run up against censorship of your books?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I have been asked not to come on author visits. I don't know that I have been banned.
One private religious school asked me not to come because in Toning the Sweep I talk about lynching — not graphically, of course, but I do talk about lynching. Even though I was going to speak to their elementary-aged children, who were too young to have read the book, they said, "We just need to know that you will not mention that book." I said, "No, I'm sorry, I can't do that." So they asked me not to come.
Last year in Michigan, I was speaking to a library reading club, and a couple days before I came, the aide associated with the club decided to call the parents and tell them that in The First Part Last, which was one of the books that the kids were reading, I had "language." She made calls to the library board, she called the parents, and she got nothing. Everyone felt the book was age-appropriate — what kids don't speak like this?
The reasons for banning books are just ludicrous to me. It's interesting to me that the last thing that is banned is always violence. Sexuality, language and content are banned. Violence is not. You can blow up a few buildings, and you can have people dragged down the street. People will stick guns in their children's hands and send them out in the woods to shoot animals, but they don't want to hear about sex. It's so ridiculous.
TEACHINGBOOKS: Please describe your writing process.
ANGELA JOHNSON: I like to write longhand on legal pads. I just stick my legal pad in my backpack and go down to the park. Nowadays, everybody's in the coffeehouses on their laptops. That really freaks me out. I just started with a computer a couple years ago, but I think I'll always have the legal pads with me as well.
I lost the first half of Toning the Sweep on a word processor with no hard drive in it. It was before I understood about hard copies. I lived in a neighborhood next to an elementary school that always used to blow the electricity. At least twice a day the electricity on the whole street would go out. And there I was, page 47, I remember it vividly, had not printed anything. Everything was saved on a disk. I didn't push the little "s." The electricity went out, and it was all gone.
TEACHINGBOOKS: How did you come to write in such a wide variety of formats (picture books, poetry, novels)?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I lucked out in the beginning of my career with my editor, Richard Jackson. He never told me that I had to make choices. He never said, "You write picture books." There was never a time when he said, "You can't write poetry or short stories." I have a collection of short stories. I wrote board books. Anything I wrote, he said, "Okay."
Then, I started meeting other writers and saw that there are people who just write novels. I know I sound naïve, but I was surprised that they just write novels or they just write picture books or they just write poetry. I thought it was a given to write whatever I felt like, and I thought everyone did it. There are no parameters for me, which is wonderful. The only thing I won't touch is adult literature. But as far as kids' stuff is concerned, preschool to teen and all forms in between are great.
TEACHINGBOOKS: What do you believe is the importance of writing books with African-American protagonists?
ANGELA JOHNSON: I can equate it to the first time I was in school and I picked up a book by Ezra Jack Keats. I opened a book and there were children who looked like me. I cannot tell you the world that opened up. When I was a child, Ezra Jack Keats' books were the only ones with African American children in them.
What he was doing was looking out his window and these were the children he was seeing. It doesn't matter that he was white. There was a little girl in a tiny library in Ohio — me — who opened up this book and saw someone who had my skin color.
In all my books, though the stories are universal, the protagonist will likely be an African-American child, because I remember that feeling of being in a sea of books where no one looked like me. My textbooks did not have any African American children. Finally in the '70s I started to see books with African-American child protagonists, including the book Cornbread, Earl and Me.
Even though I want this to be a universal experience, I love the idea that there is an African-American child saying, "This belongs to me. Someone has recognized that kids who look like me are important and valid."
I've gone to schools that were mostly white, and I've had children ask me, "Why do you just write books with black children?" I say, "I'm African American, and I'm writing through my eyes." And then I say, "When you go into your library, how many books do you pick up that have kids who look just like you?" And they always say, "Yeah, there are a lot of them, aren't there?" Then I say, "Don't you think you need a few more like these, too?" And they say, "Yeah, okay."
TEACHINGBOOKS: Despite an emphasis on African-American characters, the themes and emotional journeys in your books strike a universal chord.
ANGELA JOHNSON: I believe we're all connected. One of the big problems in this country is people don't always feel that they are connected. We're all on this road together, bumping into each other, and we're all so connected. We have been thrown in this place. There has to come a time where we say, "It doesn't really matter if he's black or if he's Asian or if he's white. This is a universal story."
In the end what I want is for anyone to be able to pick up one of these books and it doesn't matter: the color of the children, where they live. All of these stories are everyone's story. If anyone can pick my book up and say, "Yes, this is just a wonderful story; I've felt this; I knew someone who felt this," then I've done what I was supposed to do. What else is there? It's great. It's better than ice cream.


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