Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Japanese Forms

Japanese Forms: Haiku/Tanka

Haiku

http://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Haiku-Poem

Tanka

http://www.tankaonline.com/ 

Frog Pond journal

http://www.hsa-haiku.org/frogpond/ 

About our own former teacher, Tom Painting:

http://www.robynhoodblack.com/blog.htm?post=936478 

Here are some examples of his work:



crickets
the pulse in a hollow
of her neck


Acorn #10, 2004



spring plowing
a flock of blackbirds
turns inside out


Frogpond XXV:2



detour
she returns my hand
to the wheel


Frogpond XXVI:3



year's end
the weight of pennies
in the mason jar


Modern Haiku 39:2



Indian summer
bison graze the shadow
of the Bitterroots


Modern Haiku 43:1



summer stars
my children ask me
to name a favorite


The Heron’s Nest, June 2011


All poems ©Tom Painting. All rights reserved.

Monday, March 23, 2015

Neruda/Poetry

AGENDA:

EQ: What is TPCASTT poetry analysis?  How can it be used to analyze poetry?


Read more Neruda

http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poem/179412 

http://allpoetry.com/Ode-To-The-Artichoke

TPCASTT

 http://skyview.vansd.org/bquestad/cw/poetry/TPCASTT%20Template.htm

Using the TPCASTT handout, analyze one of Neruda's poems

WRITING: Work on poetry projects

Wednesday, March 18, 2015

More about Neruda

Agenda:  Master Class with Karen Thompson Walker

Read more Neruda

Work on poetry assignments

From bookrags:


"Tonight I Can Write" was published in 1924 in a collection of poems by Pablo Neruda

titled Veinte poemas de amor y una cancion desesperada. The collection was translated
into English in 1969 by W. S. Merwin as Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair.
 

Although some reviewers were shocked by the explicit sexuality in the poems, the
collection became a best seller and was translated into several languages. Marjorie

Agosin writes in her article on Neruda, "One of the reasons that Twenty Love Poems

 
draws the reader so powerfully is the sobriety of expression and the economy of the
images." René de Costa in his article on Neruda notes that all the poems in this
collection contain "a highly charged confessional intimacy that challenged and charmed

the sensibility of its reader, creating in the process a contemporary stil nuovo which
 

continues to resonate in the language of love." The poems chart a love story from the
initial infatuation to the release of passion, and finally to a separation. "Tonight I Can
Write," the penultimate poem in the poetic sequence, expresses the pain the speaker
feels after losing his lover. The bittersweet sentiment recalls their passionate
relationship and his recognition that "love is so short, forgetting is so long."

XX
Tonight I can write the saddest lines.

Write, for example, 'The night is starry

and the stars are blue and shiver in the distance.'

The night wind revolves in the sky and sings.

Tonight I can write the saddest lines.

I loved her, and sometimes she loved me too.

Through nights like this one I held her in my arms.

I kissed her again and again under the endless sky.

She loved me, sometimes I loved her too.

How could one not have loved her great still eyes.

Tonight I can write the saddest lines.

To think that I do not have her. To feel that I have lost her.

To hear the immense night, still more immense without her.

And the verse falls to the soul like dew to the pasture.

What does it matter that my love could not keep her.

The night is starry and she is not with me.

This is all. In the distance someone is singing. In the distance.

My soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.

My sight tries to find her as though to bring her closer.

My heart looks for her, and she is not with me.

The same night whitening the same trees.

We, of that time, are no longer the same.

I no longer love her, that's certain, but how I loved her.

My voice tried to find the wind to touch her hearing.

Another's. She will be another's. As she was before my kisses.

Her voice, her bright body. Her infinite eyes.

I no longer love her, that's certain, but maybe I love her.

Love is so short, forgetting is so long.

Because through nights like this one I held her in my arms

my soul is not satisfied that it has lost her.

Though this be the last pain that she makes me suffer

and these the last verses that I write for her.
 

Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Speculative Fiction

AGENDA:

BELLWORK:
  "Happiness" poem

WRITING:  Continue working on your speculative fiction piece.  Try to finish it today.

Montana 1948 Readings/Natalie Goldberg Test 1 "I remember"

  Montana 1948 Readings/Natalie Goldberg Test 1 "I remember" Marcy Gamzon • Sep 21 (Edited Sep 21) 100 points Due Tomorrow AGENDA:...